March 12, 2008

Eugene Schwartz Ad #52: "One Day With This Man Could Make You Rich!"

The year was 1969…the place was Manhattan.

While flower children were frolicking in nearby Central Park, an unusual event was taking place at the Commodore Hotel in midtown.

The event was called the "Seminar for Future Millionaires." Yes, long before Joe Sugarman, Gary Halbert and Jay Abraham set foot on a seminar stage, mail order magnate, Joseph Cossman gave the first direct marketing seminar for the general public.

Even though this ad is nearly forty years old, it's not very different from most seminar promotions today…except perhaps it's better written and gets to the point in 1/10th the time.

Of course, Joe Cossman hired the best copywriter for the task, Gene Schwartz.

Today, a million doesn't sound like much, especially with the US dollar slipping 16% this year. But at that time, it was worth close to $7 million in 2007 terms (and convertible to gold.)

So the claim and title of the seminar were a strong pull and backed up by world class copy.

This is your personal invitation to a “Seminar for Future Millionaires.” It is given by America's most successful “Start-from-Nothing-Millionaire”…E. Joseph Cossman, who started a spare-time business for himself with a kitchen table for his desk, a few hundred dollars and an idea. And who today, at the age of 49, has retired with over $1,000,000!

And the most important fact of all…Joe Cossman made this one million dollars, almost completely by mail order, using other people's effort and money and in less than a few years from the time he was working as a $65-a-week shipping clerk with “no future.”

Let me repeat this fact again: Just a few golden secrets — secrets you are going to learn at the Commodore Hotel in Manhattan on Saturday, April 26th netted this man over $1,000,000

Gene Schwartz's bullets are terrific. I like this one:

  • An introduction to one of the cleverest (and laziest) men in the United States. He works from 4:30 to 7:30 five nights a week — and earns over $12,000 a year. His gimmick: a stroll through a shopping center parking lot, a couple of part-time high school kids, and an irresistible message written on a 5-inch by 8-inch card.

Among the things I'd love to know about this event are:

  • What was the turnout?
  • Who were the attendees? (Was an adolescent Jay Abraham scratching his goatee in the third row?)
  • If there were product sales…were they as shameless and vulgar as they are today?

I'm afraid we'll never know.

Here is: "One Day With This Man Could Make You Rich!"

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December 4, 2007

Online Copywriter Andrew Cavanagh @ 3:56 am

This is a fabulous Eugene Schwartz ad that I've never seen before and I have literally hundreds of Schwartz ads.

Thank you so much for this Lawrence.

I agree about the bullets…bloody fantastic.

Kindest regards,
Andrew Cavanagh

December 6, 2007

Alger Cavalloro @ 4:29 am

Hey Lawrence,

Man, let me catch a breath, will ya?

You keep posting ads that work better than the
multi-dimensional time machine sitting out in my garage.

Joe Cossman's Millionaire Book was one of the few "Get Rich"
books at the local library down on main street.

I suspect this was because it was one of the first "main stream" biz op books of the era.

I bet the book is still there in the same spot, on the shelf,
gathering dust, waiting for another adolescent hustler to discover it.

Mr. Ant Farm, Mr. Potato Spud Gun, Mr. "Make a Million" mail order hustler himself. Of course his progeny carries on the tradition or a facsimile of it today.

I don't remember this ad, but I do remember variations of it the Opportunity Mags of the era. That big mug shot of Joe Cossman was the logo.

Lawrence, I know your stock-in-trade is forgotten mastepieces of the past but how about some current day space ads that pass muster?

And thanks for keeping this blog and your work pure.

No affiliate links, no shucking and jiving for joint venture deals and no hidden motives.

A.C.Cavalloro

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