February 24, 2008

Eugene Schwartz Ad #14: "Do You Have the Courage to Earn a Half Million Dollars a Year?"

Eugene Schwartz Ad # 14Here's an ad written by Eugene Schwartz that appeared forty years ago to the day in the conservative financial publication, "Barron's National Business and Financial Weekly."

It's a little high brow yet at its core, it's a biz-op ad. And it's probably the most significant space ad in this area written by Gene Schwartz.

While there's a link below to a fully readable image of the ad, if you do nothing else, put this into your headline swipe file.

What I appreciate about this ad (and Gene's copy approach overall) was his ability to package a giant and often unbelievable promise into an irresistible read.

The "Do you have the courage…" preamble really adds topspin to the claim.

Imagine running across a headline today that reads: "Now You Can Earn a Half Million Dollars a Year."

Even for the average white collar worker reading Barron's, this is hard to swallow.

Now, imagine encountering this ad in 1967. That year, $500 thousand was worth over $3 million in 2007 dollars.

The claim seems nuts.

Yet this ad had a ton of insertions over the course of several years.

Were people just gullible in the 60's? Hardly.

The beauty of "Do You Have the Courage to Earn a Half Million Dollars a Year?" verses "Now You Can Earn a Half Million Dollars a Year" is it deflects the attention from the claim to an internal quality in the reader. The headline is then paid off perfectly with the qualification process spelled out in the body copy.

This is one of those evergreen headlines that's very customizable today. The real beauty of it is it's virgin swipe material for use online.

Unlike the now nauseating "Who else wants?" headline which mindless marketers continue to ape, this is the kind of headline that can add a jolt of power to your promotions and make them stand out from the rest of the crowd.

Yes, there are a few dated elements to the ad like the exclusive use of masculine pronouns but Gene's copy is timeless.

Here are the lapel grabbing fourth and fifth paragraphs of the ad.

And above all, [for the kind of man] who is willing to accept the responsibility for other men's futures, the loneliness that always surrounds the person in command, and the envy and hostility that will plague him for the rest of his life.

Do you have the courage to reach out for this kind of life? To accept its incredible rewards and incredible hazards? If you do, read on. If you don't, consider yourself lucky and turn the page — there is nothing left in this ad that will make an iota of sense to you.

Download this word-for-word blockbuster ad of Eugene Schwartz's "Do You Have the Courage to Earn a Half Million Dollars a Year?"

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June 6, 2008

Andrew Cavanagh @ 6:49 am

Tying your prospect's personal pride into the headline in this way is the kind of brilliance Eugene Schwartz was famous for.

And you're so right.

Without the question the headline would be almost impossible to believe but with it that challenge to your pride almost forces you to read the ad.

Great copy.

Kindest regards,
Andrew Cavanagh

December 6, 2008

Bruce @ 4:40 pm

I think the biggest action word, is Courage. It is this
one word that turns this ad from being medicore to being
a great display ad.

Merry Xmas
Bruce

December 16, 2008

Kwasi @ 3:50 am

Questioning the capability of people is the key of this ad. It challenges everybody who reads it and sets them to do what he wanted them to do

Its something from a great and creative mind.

Happier Times Ahead
Kwasi

March 8, 2009

Admiral Design and Print @ 7:37 am

I'm glad I'm not the only one to find headlines starting "Who Else Wants…" particularly nauseating!

Regards,
Gill Clark

May 26, 2009

Lenny Eng @ 4:31 am

I think the real magic in this ad was the fact that Schwartz attacked the biggest objection to the sale head-on. The claim of "How To Make Half a Million DOllars" automatically illicits skepticism and in itself would be a huge barrier to readership, let a lone a sale. Schwartz addresses this objection in the headline and switches the subject from "you can" (a greed appeal) to "do you have the courage to" (an ego appeal)… Reminds me of something I picked up from Zig Ziglar's "Secrets to Closing the Sale" (a must read for all copywriters in my opinion) and that is "the best time to handle the objection is before it occurs". Great site by the way!

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